Interestingly, I found an older version on my computer of a story that I actually wrote in 2014 for the Comic Invasion Magazine competition.
It slipped my mind that I had worked on this idea already. The newer story is named »Kolonie Berlin«, while the older version went by »Die Elektrische Stadt«.
Storyboard-wise, I think the reworked comic tells itself better and more graspably through the pictures. (As, one of the most difficult things about making comics could be to lead intelligibly through time and space. Or in other words: Create a reality.)
But the older story has some nice ideas in it which I later left out.
If you want to compare the first take to the newer version, here's a link to »Kolonie Berlin«.